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Nazim Hikmet - A Sad State Of Freedom

You waste the attention of your eyes, 
the glittering labour of your hands, 
and knead the dough enough for dozens of loaves 
of which you'll taste not a morsel; 
you are free to slave for others-- 
you are free to make the rich richer. 

The moment you're born 
they plant around you 
mills that grind lies 
lies to last you a lifetime. 
You keep thinking in your great freedom 
a finger on your temple 
free to have a free conscience. 

Your head bent as if half-cut from the nape, 
your arms long, hanging, 
your saunter about in your great freedom: 
you're free 
with the freedom of being unemployed. 

You love your country 
as the nearest, most precious thing to you. 
But one day, for example, 
they may endorse it over to America, 
and you, too, with your great freedom-- 
you have the freedom to become an air-base. 

You may proclaim that one must live 
not as a tool, a number or a link 
but as a human being-- 
then at once they handcuff your wrists. 
You are free to be arrested, imprisoned 
and even hanged. 

There's neither an iron, wooden 
nor a tulle curtain 
in your life; 
there's no need to choose freedom: 
you are free. 
But this kind of freedom 
is a sad affair under the stars.

Added: on March 14th, 2005 at 10:12 PM | Viewed: 3642 times | Comments (3)


A Sad State Of Freedom - Comments and Information

Poet: Nazim Hikmet
Poem: A Sad State Of Freedom

Comment 3 of 3, added on March 15th, 2009 at 5:51 PM.

Influenced no doubt by his political views and his experiences of imprisonment, I think Nazim is arguing that freedom can be seen as a negative as well as a positive. Therefore we are free to be exploited, abused and ultimately destroyed. Interestingly in the west Erich Fromm was making a similar point around this time, wtih 1942's Fear of Freedom.

Joel from United Kingdom
Comment 2 of 3, added on March 28th, 2005 at 10:33 PM.

Perhaps the worst kind of freedom is freedom that looks like it: mocking us, mocking our deeper disquiet that there is indeed no freedom.

Jo from Singapore
Comment 1 of 3, added on March 14th, 2005 at 10:12 PM.

I am interested in analyzing this poem but only have a vague idea of the poet’s main message. Initially, I believed that the message was how we, as average citizens are free to do whatever we please but I would like to know if other readers found a deeper, possibly more negative meaning. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Michael from Canada

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