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Comment 21 of 21, added on November 14th, 2006 at 4:19 PM.
Hi my name is tierea and i waz just shown you my poems so here is one.its called *DONE* im done im threw threw messin with me feels like you waz just playin with my mind cause everytime i call your phone fells like im waistin my time so i dont call nomore cause like you said im not on the same level you on so i take your word and stop blowin up your fone like everybody says just leave that boy alone so i do but when i see your face i fell right back in love with you and when i say im threw everybody knows thats not TRUE so now im done im threw threw messin with you *DONE*
Tierea from United States
Comment 20 of 21, added on May 15th, 2006 at 7:57 AM.
May not be true but good imagination of all probabilities of poetry, and poets and poetry lovers.
Mohanchand Patil from India
Comment 19 of 21, added on May 1st, 2006 at 7:04 AM.
um..this poem was really dumb..
D.J. from United States
Comment 18 of 21, added on May 1st, 2006 at 7:01 AM.
this poem was dumb but funny....but still dumb. not sexist.
Linda.Love. from United States
Comment 17 of 21, added on April 1st, 2006 at 8:56 PM.
How on earth could u get this poem to be sexist?! That's completely absurd and unfounded.
This a good poem. It's simple, but it makes you think. I like it
lenny b. from Jamaica
Comment 16 of 21, added on March 21st, 2006 at 2:07 AM.
It's hard to see how this poem could be considered sexist. To those who don't understand it- stop trying and it will make sense.
Peter from Belgium
Comment 15 of 21, added on March 14th, 2006 at 10:24 AM.
that there is no such thing as "racism" against women... women are not a race. they are a species. it's called being sexist, not racist.
p.s. the poem was great.
Dave from United States
Comment 14 of 21, added on February 13th, 2006 at 6:42 PM.
I like this poem. I'ma teen and I really dont understand poetry but this was good..
Zach from United States
Comment 13 of 21, added on February 2nd, 2006 at 6:31 PM.
interesting and full of un-answered questions but i lyke it
morgan
Comment 12 of 21, added on January 29th, 2006 at 1:40 PM.
and how is this a hyperbole?????
Kelsie
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Hi my name is tierea and i waz just shown you my poems so here is one.its called *DONE* im done im threw threw messin with me feels like you waz just playin with my mind cause everytime i call your phone fells like im waistin my time so i dont call nomore cause like you said im not on the same level you on so i take your word and stop blowin up your fone like everybody says just leave that boy alone so i do but when i see your face i fell right back in love with you and when i say im threw everybody knows thats not TRUE so now im done im threw threw messin with you *DONE*
Tierea from United States