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Mary Oliver - The Journey

One day you finally knew
what you had to do, and began,
though the voices around you
kept shouting
their bad advice—
though the whole house
began to tremble
and you felt the old tug
at your ankles.
"Mend my life!"
each voice cried.
But you didn't stop.
You knew what you had to do,
though the wind pried
with its stiff fingers
at the very foundations,
though their melancholy
was terrible.
It was already late
enough, and a wild night,
and the road full of fallen
branches and stones.
But little by little,
as you left their voices behind,
the stars began to burn
through the sheets of clouds,
and there was a new voice
which you slowly
recognized as your own,
that kept you company
as you strode deeper and deeper
into the world,
determined to do
the only thing you could do—
determined to save
the only life you could save.

Added: on May 30th, 2006 at 5:39 PM | Viewed: 19763 times | Comments (8)


The Journey - Comments and Information

Poet: Mary Oliver
Poem: The Journey

Poem of the Day on:
Mar 26 2006

Comment 8 of 8, added on October 22nd, 2006 at 9:06 PM.

For me it is a poem about hope and courage and the experience of growing beyond a bad marriage or a painful childhood.

Chuck Sullivan from United States
Comment 7 of 8, added on June 12th, 2006 at 3:45 AM.

I'm sorry, but I really found this poem quite unprofessional and not worth reading. I sincerely hope that this comment will be posted and that not just praise is allowed. No offence to Mary Oliver, but I am quite a fond poetry reader and thought that this one was simply "faking" depth. What I mean is that she attempts to make her poem abstractly, meaningful and revelationary when really it is a weak attempt. I'm not sure why my views are not present within the other comments posted and perhaps I am the only one that thinks this way, I guess poetry is like that. Another fault i find with the poem is that it simply isn't really a poem, there is no rhyme(I know this isn't always necessary) or even any rhythm, it could just as easily be written in continuous prose and mean the same thing.

Xavier from Australia
Comment 6 of 8, added on May 30th, 2006 at 5:39 PM.

I can't believe how much this poem relates to me and some past experiences I've had. I really like this poem and it was incredibly inspiring.

kivan from United States

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