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Elizabeth Jennings - One Flesh

Lying apart now, each in a separate bed, 
He with a book, keeping the light on late, 
She like a girl dreaming of childhood, 
All men elsewhere - it is as if they wait 
Some new event: the book he holds unread, 
Her eyes fixed on the shadows overhead. 

Tossed up like flotsam from a former passion, 
How cool they lie. They hardly ever touch, 
Or if they do, it is like a confession 
Of having little feeling - or too much. 
Chastity faces them, a destination 
For which their whole lives were a preparation. 

Strangely apart, yet strangely close together, 
Silence between them like a thread to hold 
And not wind in. And time itself's a feather 
Touching them gently. Do they know they're old, 
These two who are my father and my mother 
Whose fire from which I came, has now grown cold?

Added: on April 21st, 2006 at 4:51 AM | Viewed: 2878 times | Comments (3)


One Flesh - Comments and Information

Poet: Elizabeth Jennings
Poem: One Flesh

Poem of the Day on:
Feb 13 2008

Comment 3 of 3, added on July 29th, 2006 at 9:25 AM.

I read this as a cold detachment between the parents. They sleep apart; sex is a confession (act of seeking forgiveness for sins committed--the seeker and the confessor); there is no connection with their thoughts. A sad poem because the daughter can see the parents merely staying together as a duty, not one of true, passionate love. The daughter states that the fire is gone from them.

dallas from United States
Comment 2 of 3, added on May 16th, 2006 at 1:40 PM.

i think dis poem is about a couple dat have grown old together and their daughter thinks that their love has faded away but the truth is that their love has grown much deeper than she thinks thats why they are still together. they have gone beyond making love to show their love for eachother now the silence is okay for them and that is what they appreciate

tania from Russia
Comment 1 of 3, added on April 21st, 2006 at 4:51 AM.

This poem talks about a love that was one very powerful but with age has faded away. this poem has many themes eg; old age, love, death.

Ricky from Sri Lanka

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